Night Mistress

hey. I think this is cool how bella become part of Carlisle's family. one question: When is Edward coming in? I will be looking out for the nect chapter or ...

it's good. I still can't get use to Nora and Carment though. I hope You have someone in mind for sophia. good in luck the next chapter. and thanks for ...

have you read the book?

Interesting. What is she going to do next? is she going to say some about it or is she just going to let it? Don't let her ingore it. He's ...

this part didn't grab at me. your sure make to where it grabs at your reader and making them want to read it. I do think you shoud continue it. ...

Is that a bit better? Ashelylee and Periwinkle: Thanks for looking at my story. I know this wwas short but I want to get the reader's attention into this. I ...

Yeah, me neither. I pre-order the fourth one. It comes out in September. hey, since you have read the house of night books, would you mind reading my fanfic about ...

ummm...a demon loving an angel, i take it? It's different and I enjoy different. I don't see anything wrong with it, but don't take my word with it. I like ...

wow. i can feel the emotion come from this story. this is so sad and yet so true because ...sometimes, in the real world that does happen. i hope Becca ...

That defindly grabbing my attention. this is a first reading of an action/adventure fic. it soud pretty good. *on to the first chapter*

interesting. keep it going. i want to find ut what happens.

this is interesting. keep going.

add more next time. put up another one soon.

interesting.

interesting